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Helping Businesses Succeed Online Through Digital Marketing | Specialties: Pay-Per-Click Advertising and Content Marketing. Google Partner.

Here’s a simple tip to make your writing more powerful: put the words you want to emphasize in a sentence at the end.  I think I picked this up from listening to interviews with stand-up comedians. But it’s also in Strunk and White’s essential “Elements of Style.” They provide this comparison: Sentence 1: “This steel is principally used for making razors, because of its hardness.”  Sentence 2: “Because of its hardness, this steel is used principally for making razors.” Sentence 2 puts the emphasis on razors. It’s not unlike the first sentence of this post, which places the emphasis on the word “end.” Strunk and White say this tactic gives prominence to the “new element in the sentence.” I like to think of it as a big reveal — the rest of the sentence builds anticipation, as readers wonder what the final words will be. That's where the power comes from.   Now it’s your turn: Do you have a favorite tip that has improved your writing? Let me know in the comments.  #writingtips #contentmarketingtips #bloggingforbusiness

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Kimberly Brock, CDMP

Strategic & Creative Communications Leader

2y

I would have to say that it is the idea that you avoid focusing on the "don't's." For example, "we don't offer that service" vs "we are pleased to offer 15 services to meet a variety of needs."

Linda Griffin

Author | Self-Publishing Coach | I will guide you through the journey from aspiring to published nonfiction author — in half the time of traditional publishing!

2y

Interesting! I hadn't heard this tip before but it makes sense. People remember the last thing they read or hear. A similar tip I learned is to: 1. Tell people what you plan to tell them 2. Tell them 3. Tell them what you told them People need to hear things more than once to have it sink in.

Sharon Sobel

Digital media producer serving executive directors of community non-profits who want to create marketing videos or need events livestreamed to better communicate with potential donors or partners.

2y

I love this tip, Jon! The main thing I have to do in helping clients is write "for the ear", since people aren't reading what I produce, but rather hearing it. That typically means shortening sentences- where there's a comma, consider a period.

Karlyn Ankrom

International Speaker | Social Media Marketing Instructor and Trainer | CEO | Digital Marketing Unicorn | Connector

2y

So smart!

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Robin Suomi, MBA

Startup to Growth | MEG Community| Small Business Coach/Educator/Community Builder | Solo-4 Employees | Launch to Mid-6 Figures l Masterminds | 1-1 Coaching | MEG Community| Business Planning, Strategy, Marketing & Sales

2y

Jon, great tip! It has been a while since I have thought of Strunk and White’s classic “Elements of Style." When creating content, I (try to) remember to put my writing through two "radio station" filters my target audience listens to regularly: WIIFM (What's In It For Me) and WSIC (Why Should I Care). Did I just use your tip, BTW?!!

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Deborah Turton

Bookkeeper for Small Businesses

2y

Put the orientation information first. 'In the fall, ramp up your marketing.' vs. 'Ramp up your marketing in the fall.' The first sentence tells you immediately when you should act. It's clearer and you know when and what to do.

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Brian Loebig

Owner Loebig Ink, LLC - Internet Marketing Strategist

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